Improving the Wiki.

I will be adding more content to Blood Orange’s debut album, Coastal Grooves.  As it stands now, the wiki page features the tracklist and one sentence about the album. Considering Dev Hynes’ rising popularity, I feel it is necessary to provide more information about his first solo album. I intend to add more of a description about the album and more history as to how Blood Orange became a thing. I would also like to talk about the process of creating the album as well as the impact it had on the community. For instance, Pitchfork wrote a pretty interesting article about the album, so I plan on drawing from that and other sources. Lastly, I want to include a section where it lists if any song from the album has been used in a film or TV show.

A Look Into World War 1

Anthem for Doomed Youth

What passing-bells for these who die as cattle?
      — Only the monstrous anger of the guns.
      Only the stuttering rifles’ rapid rattle
Can patter out their hasty orisons.
No mockeries now for them; no prayers nor bells;
      Nor any voice of mourning save the choirs,—
The shrill, demented choirs of wailing shells;
      And bugles calling for them from sad shires.
What candles may be held to speed them all?
      Not in the hands of boys, but in their eyes
Shall shine the holy glimmers of goodbyes.
      The pallor of girls’ brows shall be their pall;
Their flowers the tenderness of patient minds,
And each slow dusk a drawing-down of blinds.

“Bartleby The Scrivener,” Annotation Reflection

I want to start off by saying after viewing both annotated versions of the text, I was able to understand the short story better. But comprehension of the text isn’t the topic of tonight’s blog post. It’s how the annotations affected my reading experience.

I am familiar with “Genius.” It is my go-to site when I want to search the lyrics of music. This communal annotated version of “Bartleby The Scrivener,” was useful in that it helped my analysis of the work. In most of the highlighted texts, it explained the line(s) in further detail. For example, they annotated the line, “It is, of course, an indispensable part of a scrivener’s business to verify the accuracy of his copy, word by word.” The explanation is a long excerpt of the duties a scrivener has. This is cool because It gave me a ton of extra information about Bartleby’s job, but it didn’t really engage my thinking. I noticed that “Genius” didn’t ask too many questions to make me think about the text in a different way, instead, it presented somebody else’s analysis of the selected quotation. This is awesome because it can help readers who are struggling with understanding the text, but I personally wasn’t inspired to think outside of the box.

The Slate article on the hand did a great job at asking the reader questions to interpret the text differently. The annotations were bulkier and denser than the “Genius” version but I found those more advantageous. The annotation for the line “I am a man who…” made me consider the narrator’s contradictory personalities he displays throughout the story and then made me question how reliable the narrator is. “Genius'” explanation was simply defining the line.

In conclusion, I would prefer to use the Slate article to further my understanding of the story. It asked questions and presented ideas to guide me into a new way of thinking. “Genius'” only use for me would be if I didn’t understand the story.